Pitch Feedback (research)

• Overall I though that our pitch did go well i found that we delivered our point affectively to the whole class we used  power point slide to show our ideas such as target audiences and inspiration of past videos and artists however in found that most of our audience felt as if our idea because of the technological aspect was not achievable.
• According to the feedback sheet I found that most people thought that the idea did link and was suitable to our specific target audience. We used a mood board showing the usual clothes and costume that our target audience which is 16-22 will be into we used trainers,hats to describe our specific target audience and genre a sit is what we expect our audience to be wearing.
• There was a slight mix up when delivering the pitch most of the audience did think that we were going to use animated cartoon images such as the pictures that we had shown such as Kanye West in the good life video this was not our intention as we just wanted to use colourful fonts and stay away from the more advanced cartoon animated images as we knew that those ambitions will be virtually impossible with the technology that we had in college.
• We wanted to move away from the idea of narrative within our music video as i believe that it is too mainstream and in some ways boring and repetitive we thought that kanye wests ideas of throwing lyrics at teh screen would be an easy yet affective way to make our music video as our lyrics are fairly random and does not really follow a meaning so colourful urban fonts is a great idea to engage our audience within the video.
• From our pitch i found that people did like our idea and thought that it was original and matched our target audience but are not thinking it is achievable when reading the sheets i found this is because of the mix up of cartoon images used we are specificcally using fonts for parts of the video as well as the performer.
• I am fairly worried about the negative feedback on the idea of using fonts etc however teh feedback on originality and logistical arrangements were impressive as our risk assessment would be bery brief as we are not using light systems or filming on busy roads or near rivers etc we are thinking of using a white background throughout the video and throwing colorful fonts at the screen